"Stop and rest" is so poignant, thought it will be repeated in the second stanza.
Thank you so much for your comment.. will try that style. Usually I’m timid about repeating lines .. but it could give something beautiful indeed .. thanks !
"Stop and rest" is so poignant, thought it will be repeated in the second stanza.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your comment.. will try that style. Usually I’m timid about repeating lines .. but it could give something beautiful indeed .. thanks !
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